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Just a day
An ordinary day.
Driving around.
An ordinary day.
Driving around.
Nothing to do,
Nothing to say,
Not knowing where I’m bound.
Driving through these empty streets
Looking around,
Not knowing where people may meet.
Target one day
Park the next,
This land I do love is not the best.
Just normal life consists around here.
Most kids are just look’n
For their next place, to have a beer.
We wander near and far,
Theirs nothing to do.
Hence, we go to others peoples clubs and bars.
Simple life.
We go.
We do.
We try and get through.
But where we lay our head to sleep.
May be bad,
But in my heart I’ll always keep.
We do.
We try and get through.
But where we lay our head to sleep.
May be bad,
But in my heart I’ll always keep.
3 comments:
That was a really deep poem. I enjoyed reading it. I liked how every once in a while there was a rhyming verse. I did see a grammatical error though. I think it really did describe your city becasue most of the time there really isn't anything much to do.
I thought your poem was very good. Your community sounds like mine how there is not much to do and you did a good way of showing it. I also like the way you poem was constructed or the form you made it in.
If you expanded it slightly you could make this into a song. Seriously, I love it. Very deep, it kept my attention the entire way through. Great job.
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